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Fear in love

Falling in love could be the first thing
Falling in love could be the worst thing
Falling in love with you could be the worst thing I ever do

With you so far away how could this ever work?
Never see you, never feeling the arms embrace me
Never smelling that sweet protective Sent

Falling In love could be the first thing
Falling in love could be the worst thing
Falling in love with you could be the worst thing.

I wounder I worry “Could this ever work?” You say “I love you babe”and 2,903 miles dissolve into 3 from my heart to yours

Falling in love could be the first thing
Falling in love could be the worst thing
Falling in love with you could be the worst thing I ever do
I could be ruined worse then Pompeii, Frozen in time Ruined worse then Rome Ruined worse then the Trojans ruined worse then Stonehenge
But I can't help but fall fast and hard into you love
2,903 miles
I'd walk it for you
Always

Falling in love could be the first thing
Falling in love could be the worst thing
Falling in love with you could be the worst thing
Falling in love with you could be the best thing

Author notes

this is one of the poems i had to do for school.

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  • hmm... this poem is good but work on the spelling, spacing, and maybe shortening the lines a little. but all in all its pretty cool. nice job and welcome to AllPoetry. have fun!


  • xtaylorx
    April 25
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    I LOVE IT!! its awesome!!