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A Last Laugh

My frozen self splinters.

Not much left for body snatchers.

A contest entry

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  • Azgar
    September 1
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    :)


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 20

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    Now, this is the kind of near-emo write that I like. I love the way the second line contrasts (and ridicules) the melodrama of the first. The humorous impact would be lost if it were any longer. Thanks so much for entering my contest!

  • Hekate gold member
    April 25
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    Lol Good job! Thanks for your entry


  • marlene47 silver member
    April 20
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    I'm laughing out loud here.
    Very cool!
    Marlene