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Hollow

Missing image
Dripping from a nose so white,
No longer innocent,
Still hidden from sight,
Trying to hide the sins;
Committed tonight.

A contest entry

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel gold member
    June 17

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    i likey that image alot!
    and the poem is very mysterious,
    very sort of, whats hiding behind the mask,
    sort of thing i love this alot,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

  • Ash Friday gold member
    April 22

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    Pretty good, it has a young naeve feel to it, the blood here smells young and sweet...

    hmmmm.....well done poet.....

    See you

    maybe!

    Ash
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 22

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    This is great sweetheart very nice job indeed that picture is creepy goodluck to you in the contest much love always Auntie

  • Margaret Denham
    April 22

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    Creepy, sweetheart, very creepy. I loved it

    You told a whole story in those few lines.

    Love always
    Mummy


  • Sensual Angel gold member
    April 22

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    wow, this is a great poem. I love the last 3 lines so very much. excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck

    Akasha


  • jcat gold member
    April 22

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    Has a definate feel of nose candy....A sin that many try to hide but fail at miserably! Very well done ans best of luck in the contest
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