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True Happiness

How long has it been?

How long have I been down?

How long was I crying?

How long has it been that I wished

I was dying?

 

Too long, I've been hurt

Too long my heart has been bleeding

Too long theres been tears in my eye

and too long I've been living on lies

 

Its over now, Finally over

Everything has turned and everything is better

The agoney I've been in has stopped

From out of the dark I reach a bright light

So I dont take a chance and graps it with my might

 

He saved me and taught me so well

An emotion I've never known

And emotion my very life was missing

An emotion that is a total bliss

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.

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.

It's true happiness

Author notes

HAHA, Its kind nof written in your veiw and it is kinda like your poem... But yours is much better!
I hope you like it

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Comments

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  • <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 I STILL LOVE THIS POEM AND ALWAYS WILL!

  • this is really good, stop sayind its bad


  • VampyEyes
    April 27
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    LOVE U!

  • I SAVE YOU TOO!!!!
    LOVE YOU ASIAN!

    AND GREAT POEM!!!!


  • Innocent Evil
    April 26
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    niice!!

  • Awww a poem about Zach....

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