Condemned to blackness
The light is senseless
Whispers of dreams come flying
My message is dieing
A wonderful foreboding escape
Reigns the night so inexplicably awake
I'm darkened been faded
Feels no such hope takes place
Far stars left me shaking
No light brings me breaking
Can't reach out
My hope long gone
A place like abyss
I can't belong
What's happening to me?
Author notes
This write is from an exercise - I took my previous poem -- My Last Hope -- and rearranged the words -- I added no new ones and left some old ones out. The result was a breathless jumbled blur.. that happens to have meaning.
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This feels more aphotic and bleak then the original write.
As if the situation of existance was reanalyzed and decidely abandoned in favor of consigned oblivion when no better answers could be found.
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