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The Goddess

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The Goddess had been called by many names,
She's been around since the beginning of time,
She's been worshiped alot of different ways,
She touches in our hearts
with love,
And she is love,
She appears in many different forms,
Some believe in her,
Some don't,
But that's their choice,
She comes to you sometimes in dreams,
Her magic weaves through many dimensions & many destinies,
Some say the old religion is gone,
Some say that they've gotten rid of all priestesses,
But they're wrong,
Because I know for a fact that they are wrong,
Some say that magic no longer exists,
But they are wrong,
For magic exists in the heart & not in the mind,
There is an old saying,
When the student is ready
a teacher will appear,
Her students are popping up all over the world,
Each with their own understanding,
Each with their own magickal beliefs,
If you believe with your heart
She'll show you magick,
When you least expect it
a priestess will show up to give you a message,
Male & female may believe in The Goddess,
To touch upon the veil
& see with the heart not eyes,
Because the eyes will deceive you
but the heart will never,
True magick comes from the heart,
May The Goddess bless you,
May The Goddess bless all that you do,
So it is,
And so it will be.

By: B.E. Whitehorn & Anthony Garcia

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Written February 15th, 2002

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  • wishintreeUK
    June 12, 2005
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    Excellent Poem!

    Whether others believe in goddesses or not matters not! what matters most is what you yourself believe!

    I find the quote you put in your poem very interesting:

    There is an old saying,
    When the student is ready
    a teacher will appear


    This reminds me of a film I watched a couple of years ago, it was a story about a karate kid, he had a wonderful teacher, what amazed me about this man's way of teaching was that, he was teaching the boy without the boy even realising it!

    Your poem is like that, it seems to have a message that in some way leaves your reader with the feeling that you have imparted some special knowledge.

    Great Poem and very well done!

    ~Katie~

  • sidewinder silver member
    October 3, 2003
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    she always touches my heart within the nature of life...
    as she gives life!
    Bill
  • Seraph1885
    October 3, 2003
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    sniffles - this is simply beautiful
    I wish I could meet a real Goddess... Wait I think I have met her in the form of my mother and grandmother... I hope u have met her too...
    It is simply beautiful... Keep it up
    Love
    Maleen ' seems to already be posted, skipping.
  • Seraph1885
    October 3, 2003
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    - sniffles - this is simply beautiful
    I wish I could meet a real Goddess... Wait I think I have met her in the form of my mother and grandmother... I hope u have met her too...
    It is simply beautiful... Keep it up
    Love
    Maleen

  • sidewinder silver member
    February 15, 2002
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    Thank you AmberDawn & Priestess !
    I'm glad you enjoyed it !
  • Priestess
    February 15, 2002
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    ... this is so beautiful ...
  • AmberDawn
    February 15, 2002
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    Very nice! I am a Goddess myself, the Goddess of Dreams for I dream the future, believe it!

    Anyway, this was beautiful
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