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Take It

Blackness over turns the light
A gust of wind carries anger on its back
The storm rolls in smashing her in the face
Pain enters her mouth and her nose
Then burries itself in her lungs
She tries to scream but has no voice
She scratches at her numb chest and throat
Unable to speak and now its geting harder to breathe
She realizes there is nothing she can do
So she stands there and she takes it
Until her whole body is numb and becomes a temple
For all of her fear and love and pain
She stands as the storm smashes upon her
As her hidden emotions build up within her numb temple

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  • STUNNING WRITING HERE. THE IMAGERY AND DARKNESS IS BEYOND BELIEF. YOU WILL GO FAR. KEEP WRITING. THIS WAS VERY VERY POWERFUL.

    ALL THE BEST
    WAYNE LEON