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Rose

Red petal clippings cascade while they sing
Opulent gardens tendered by angels on wing
Sweet scented colour a smile you now bring
Extracting rose oil is such a delicate thing


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Thank you to Joyce Birkenstock for the lovely art

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  • Beautifully penned. Great rhyme and an excellent acrostic. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

  • x.Angel.x silver member
    May 11
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    this is really pretty and a good acrostic
    good luck in the contest

  • FransB gold member
    May 4
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    Not only a lovely poem, but the imagery gives off its delicacy too. Good luck. Frans

  • What a beautiful poem. So sweet. The imagery was great.


  • Candy6
    May 3
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    lovely

    Excellent acrostic.

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