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sorry

how dare you say that we have a whole life time to spend together
when we are not promised tomorrow
how dare you say we spend a lot of time together everday
being under the same roof does  not mean we are spending time together
i mean excuse the fuck out of me for enjoying the presence of the person i love
excuse me for needing some attention
excuse me for not being a tv or computer screen
i am sorry i have to fight with technology for a damn kiss
i am sorry for wanting from you the love and attention i just got from you a few weeks ago when we first touched
i am sorry i dont have a life here and you are the only thing i know
i am sorry i came from another country and then decided to live with you cause i thought that was what you wanted and you just wanted me less than part time
i am sorry you have not lived with a woman in years and you are used to being a single guy
i am sorry
im sorry
im sorry
but damnit you say you want me and you want this
i am dealing with a lot of changes myself
you should not have shown me that side if that is not who you are going to be with me
i am sorry
i am sorry
i am always sorry

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  • Patpowersnoshoepoet gold member
    May 13

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    Wow..you conveyed your anger in this one Alicia. Glad there is a place we can express our selves. Thanks for writing and hopefully things will get better.


  • secberm
    May 8

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    I think you should keep saying it though I don't think you should be sorry. Never ever be sorry for following your hearts. It speaks to you as it speaks in this write. Fight with it. Fight for what you want. Fight for what you believe you deserve. Speak. Powerful piece sister. Write on. One.

    Dez


  • Ashe Nyte
    May 7

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    Wow....this poem has a lot of anger in it. I can relate to feeling better after writing stuff down. That's sometimes the best release of emotion.


  • Vindictive
    May 7

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    wow thats intense. ranting always makes us feel better... or just adds to the fury... either way...

    what country are you in and where are you from, if you don't mind me asking?

  • mwilson50
    May 6

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    The shape of your write

    Looks like a mushroom cloud, believe it or not, at least to my eyes. Pretty apt, too, as your feelings are building up to an 'explosion'. Sounds to me like you need to have that "crucial conversation" . And, if need be, get the hell out while you can.

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