Falling,
our soul’s connection ablaze
saved from drowning
in bleeding gaps
Only when forgiveness
-rains-
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- **15 words only** by delightfulmess.
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to taste the passion
needs no forgiveness
only raw heat on skin
is when you and I
truly sing...
C
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ooooh... Love this take.
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
Delila
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a very passionate declaration, I like the idea of forgiveness raining, it sounds soothing after the flames.
. Rewarded 4
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Shouldn't it be reins? I think this has a nice message to it. I like this.
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went with "rains" to give a physical feeling to putting out the fire.
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