Hold me against that wall,
blank space like your face,
I don't want to see your eyes,
they pierce me
press against my skin
so I can hear your breath
in laboured gasps,
vicious tongue that
tastes the salt
I need your venom
deep inside, to quench desire,
I have no need to know your name
or hear your voice
let your fingers question breasts
in supple firmness, the heat of
handprints left until I moan
we can take the delicacy indoors
but I've always preferred
making it in the rain
then just fade away
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie: Tease Me by Lotus-Mama.
600 points, ended May 11, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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romantic needs expressed
romanticly
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*omg* you stole my fantasy! lol lol lol
a body in need, a soul full of desire...doesn't need the voice are the lieing eyes...just hold me in the rain then quietly fade away...sighs...awesome dear one, just awesome and winner for-sure :f thank you kindly for sharing with me :f
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Uh... Wow!
Is left speechless, mmmm ~Bret~
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It is good to leave a guy speechless now and again...keeps the mystery alive
Love, C
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Gooood quickie tease indeed...you gave here
ohh passionatly SO HOT
Good luck darl, this definetly needs a trophy attached to it
Cin
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From memory again or was it fantasy lol Can't remember!
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