You never realize just how alone you are
'Till you swim to your plastic coated whim
Alone, surrounded, completely confounded
To wade in this barren sea of people lacking quality.
But does humanity rack my body with this insanity?
Rather,they are sharks, fins hidden by the dark,
Reflecting fake smiles mass produced in quantity,
Unsuspecting deep lies, slipping from their consumer tubed lips,
Circling in anticipation of their latest creation
Teeth bared, pearls reflecting your impaired despair
And the predatory gleam in their victorious eyes
tears
you
in
...
rip for rip.
Author notes
Written in the cateferia of my wonderous school.
Honesty is always appreciated
Comments
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Wow... I can definitely see where this came from. Excellent work my friend. Well worded and well penned.
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"...fines hidden by the dark..." fines? I'm not sure if you meant something else there, but that doesn't make sense.
I'm not sure if you title this because you really mean people are vicious about getting food or because you wrote this in the cafeteria.
It's interesting. Descriptive. -
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Oooh,thanks very much for that. I editted it to what it should have been.
As for the title, I used the cafeteria to describe the student body, or teenagers as a whole to some extent.
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