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My Mermaid.

Iceilica,
Her crystal sapphire tail ploughing up and down behind her.

I'm waiting,
All alone on the rusty pier,
I know she will come.

Twenty minutes,
She should be here,
To witness this,

She jumped,
Doing a single backflip,
Gazing at the stars.

I'm excited,
Jumping up and down
And...

I've done it,
I'm one of them,
I'm a mer.

A mer?

I used to be...

I don't want to...

I miss my family...

How could I be...

Doesn't matter.

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  • I really like it!! Is it based on the book ingo?
    Anyway, good luck in my contest!

  • Brisingr
    May 14
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    B

    Bit ott (Over the top

  • Brisingr
    May 14
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    Bit ot
  • Cool!
    I love the theme!

    Wow, you've entered all the maximum amount of poems allowed in my contest! Reallu, really good! Keep up the good work!


  • Brisingr
    May 9
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    OMG

    That was well good

  • Brisingr
    May 9
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    OMG

    That was well good
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