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Darlington

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Made camp just past midnight,

 

edge of the wood.

 

anxious for my get away,

 

should any one intrude.

 

chewed cold jerky,

 

washed down with spit,

 

held in my belly mostly by grit.

 

drop lined my horse,

 

lay cold on the ground

 

saddle for my pillow,

 

trying to come unwound.

 

thinking about my ma and pa,

 

how much I  loved em,

 

and my little sister Kate ,

 

on that awful day how they had met they're fate.

 

Pa died trying to save ma and little Kate.

 

two big men had they're way,

 

 rode up in back just in time to see them ride away.

 

Chris is my name, 

 

I took my pa's fastest horse, his fastest gun,

 

I am seventeen and I am on the run.

 

Tracked  those two men straight into Darlington.

 

called them out one by one,

 

 hat low right in the morning sun.

 

I left them there dead on the square,

 

whistled, jumped on my horse as he came running.

 

left that town never will return ,

 

my job there is done.

 

rode home today, dug three graves

 

crying all the tears a young girl has

 

took off my hat took down my hair

 

knelt in prayer, for them for me

 

 to send those two straight to hell.

 

now God willing I'll be on my way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • malmadre gold member
    May 20
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    A good story of a tough young girl seeking justice...Congratulations on the bronze!


  • Sagerider
    May 20

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    Great write

    What a great adventure story. This one should go on and on. I know there are other evil doers that Chis could bring to Justice. Loved it.

  • Legend silver member
    May 20
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    well done a poem well deserving of its bronze award(if not higher)

  • Playjazz66
    May 18

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    A well-told tale that hinted at something but held the secret tight until the end. Very, very well done

    Jim


  • Legend silver member
    May 11

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    A wonderfully told little tale i must admit it took me by surprise to find out it was a girl.Thats the beauty of being a story teller hid the ending until the end.Excellent good luck in the contest

  • good job, defiantly sounds like a western. Sometimes I wish I could have lived back then when things were much simpler and a horse was your best friend.

    s

  • Whoa!

    This is a great piece of poetry/prose. Jeez I'd like to read a book of what happens next. Fast horse's and fast guns of a Cowgirl. Nothing like a good western with a twist.
    I hope you win! Best wishes.


  • arafura
    May 10
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    Excellent! You tell a great story my friend. Good luck in the contest!

  • This is great Thanks for the entry into my ever so humble little contest. This was a well told story, I enjoyed it.

  • Sagerider
    May 9
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    I Love this one.

    I hope you entered this in the cowboy competition, It is great. LULU

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