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Who?

July 4th 2007,
A double murder,
Griz and Sheila,
gone, forever.

"Turn the news on!"
The screen turned on,
there, a picture of
Griz...the picture
enlarged...all
I could think of...

What?, When?, How?, Why?,Who?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~*GONE BUT NOT FORGOTTEN*~

 

http://www.ci.killeen.tx.us/PD/press/2007/PR_DoubleMurder070407.pdf

 

R.I.P. Sheila Reed

 

R.I.P. Gricelda P. Ramos - - - Griz

 

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  • Wrinkling Mind
    July 6
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    forgot the clapping yellow balls

  • Wrinkling Mind
    July 6

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    This is my favorite of yours so far, I really get a good feeling of exactly what was going on in your mind when you first heard about it.

  • shattering gyspy
    May 29

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    You know my feelings on this.
    Take it with a grain of sand, then give it to God

    well done hon

    mylee

  • michelle-x-christine
    May 24
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    interesting, basic... very good.

  • midnightblue1272
    May 20
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    Tragic

    What a sad story that was. Good write here.


  • Lady Altheia silver member
    May 19

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    There is so much loss all around. I hope you can find closure. It takes many steps to get over the death of someone we love. You have been hoodwinked by a poetic bandit.

  • Twinstar gold member
    May 16

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    Hoodwink!

    How devastating for you, I am very sorry for you loss, this a heartwrenching write, and my heart goes out to you.

    God Bless!
    Debbera

    You have been hoodwinked by "The Poetic Bandits"


  • Desire gold member
    May 16

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    Hood-Winked!

    Oh My~
    I am sorry for both losses and what a tragedy~
    Very sad to inhale and I hope there comes closure in regards to finding out who did this~
    You have also been Hood-Winked by The Poetic Bandits
    My condolences to the family of both parties affected
    I commend You for Your Strength in writing about this tragedy
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PoetrysAngel2041
    May 16
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    Hoodwinked!

    This piece is so well written and you've expressed such sad sentiments. It's always difficult to grieve a friend, but the thought of having to be in your shoes and grieve two friends at once is unbearable. You've done such a good job with this piece. Excellent job!


  • tawk gold member
    May 16

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    Hood-Winked!

    O h s w e e t i e t h i s p o e m t o u c h e d m e s o d e e p l y! I a m s o s o r r y f o r y o u r l o s s . S u c h a h o r r i b l e c r i m e. I a m h e r e i f y o u w a n t t o t a l k l o v e a n d h u g s T h e r e s a


  • Polaja Greeters member
    May 16

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    Hood-Winked!

    This is an interesting poem... I read about this on your author page and I have to say that I agree with the letter from the police officer... I really admire your dedication

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • JT Sammer
    May 12

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    Hello my friend, I've never read anything of yours before but I am saddned by your loss. This is a beautiful simplistic write that came from the heart, I promise that life is going to be hard for a while with this memory but cherish the times you did have and it will help, I speak from experience. Peace n' Love, JT


  • Undying-Heartbeat
    May 12

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    :(

    Hello,
    Great write...
    It is so sad...time will heal things soon. *gives you hug* Keep faith
    *gives you a quick hug again*

  • Bob Fox
    May 10

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    Hey

    The sadest part after the who is the why. And then we weep and await the healing process. writing about it only helps. Bravo my young poet friend

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