ready to burst
at the slightest touch
of the cool wind
swaying gently
in the
quiet breeze
don't disturb
the softness
of me
multiply, i will
attack you
and the beauties that surround you
ready to burst
at the first thought
of insignificance
Author notes
Okay, so I'm not too great at free verse....
I still like this poem.
Hope you do too!
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie by plastic necklaces.
500 points, ended May 14, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this ! It makes me smile! : ) I have missed reading your writes!
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I like it!
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I think its great! nice free verse-multiply, i will
attack you
lol
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I do like it! Its a little funny in the whole "attack you" stanza, but your imagry is strong and beautiful!
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Thanks.
I thought it was kinda funny too when I wrote it.
Haha
:-P
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"ready to burst
at the first thought
of insignificance"
Not too great at free-verse? I'd call you rather talented, myself. Lovely and fairly simplistic piece about a dandelion that feels a bit flighty and inferior. *giggles*
Thanks for entering!
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Thank you!!
And I love to enter contests!
:->
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Nice one
You're not half bad at free verse, either. It was pretty good, in my opinion. >.<; I didn't even bother trying to have any kind of structure or form to it. XD Lovely write. How does this applause thing work again?
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Thanks. :->
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