i said i loved you
and you said it back
i seen you with him
all i can say is what the heck
i shared so much with you more then anyone else
i thought you cared i trusted you
but i guess i was jus a phase and nothin else
u fooled me thats for sure
but now its done
there is no cure
i hope you see
what you meant to me
cuz these are my final words to you
i cant handle it any more
i wont trouble you any longer
you said you wanted to be my wife
i thought we would grow old together
it would have been nice
i guess ill take the easy road
ive always been there for you i hope you know
but not any more after i use this knife
good bye
i see the light
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i like the theme... but omg the rhyming is so cliche. keep working on it and im sure you can improve
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Wellcome to Allpoetry!
This was so sad I could feel the care and love you had for this person. It's good to move on. Wonderful job on this, keep it up!
If you have any questions feel free to ask me!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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Sad write...seems you cared for this person alot. But you are wise enough to know to move on. You will again meet someone that will knock you off your feet. Welcome to AP. Hope you enjoy.
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