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hungry

the need is great for sex from you
its all i think about
its all i wanna do
to be inside u once more
we've done it once we can do it again
it was great u called me ur handyman
but now im addicted
i cant get enough of u
you like a drug for my heart
theres no way i can restart what i feel  
youve become every thing i want in a meal
you inflicted so much pleasure
i cannot even begin to measure
all i can say was it was great
im back for seconds now wheres my plate

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  • nobodys-girl
    June 3

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    oh wow...
    this is completly amazing!
    i love it!
    thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!

  • Hekate gold member
    May 18

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    Welcome To AP

    Hello bigtim57,

    While I can relate to this feeling it actually makes me sad reading this from a 15 year old.
    I don't mean that in a negative way. I do understand that teens go through a lot of hormone changes early now.
    I just know the consequences and hurt feelings that can come from having sex too early.

    Anyway, I do see a few things that need corrected in your poem. If you would like help with the corrections please feel free to IM me.

    Kari,
    Site Greeter

  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 15

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    wow ! man you are hungry this is actually a great read and suprise it hasn't picked up a lot of attention from the ladies but it is a great appitizer i tell you great job
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