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Save me...

Missing image
Taken from the depths,
No longer in control of my emotions,
Empathy taking over,
Not feeling my own feelings,
Stolen from my life;
I live with an outward view,
Watching myself do things I can't control,
Why are you crying?
Mum's asking again,
Where're you going?
Yet another walk not knowing where it'll end,
Haunted by the decimated dreams that plague;
The supposedly peaceful waking moments,
Save me from myself;
Only then can I try to save you.

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  • whoa i know how you feels hun,
    i get bad ngihtmares too, i hope your ok,
    you look beautiful in your face image hun,
    this write is like gorgeous and sad
    but amazing still,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

  • WolfHeart gold member
    May 16

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    Lovely poem. Sounds to me like a young woman with a big heart full of compassion. Also, you need to take care of yourself...be good to yourself and remember, there are people who love you.

  • Sometimes there's never the right words to describe sadness, it's just a hollow abyss that's so hard to climb out of, you sometimes find yourself thinking there's nothing else left.

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  • I can relate to this piece life is hard and sadness seems to always be there take care of you the best that you can be well much love always

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