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A Special Person.

I know you have your hands full,

and can only take so much,

but Mylee can't you see,

I we need you oh so very much.

 

 

Everyone sees your smile,

and thinks your okay,

when they didn't know,

you had a rough day.

 

 

You feel so alone,

this I know,

but God is with you,

high above on his throne.

 

 

What I want to say is,

Mylee can't you see,

your not alone,

your a Special person,

to not just me,

but to everybody!

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Do not fear,

for I am with you;

do not be dismaned,

for I am your God.

 

 

Isaiah 41:10

 

I can do everything through him who gives me

                           STRENGTH .

 

 

Philippians 4:13

 

 

Dedicated to Mylee who is going through a hard time right now,

 

 

Love You,

 

 

God Bless,

 

 

~*Nikki*~

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  • Slick
    August 28
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    this is very good!!! i like this. have a very nice day, -slick99
  • another sweet write for mylee, aw but a well-written and thoughtful write as well, I can see why this won silver.
  • So true.

    This is so true and it demonstrates the power behind the message of courage to face the unknown. And it gives strength to those who do know what they are facing.

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 31

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    Beautiful Poem

    This was such a lovely poem for sweet Mylee. Congratulations on winning the Silver. Take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • Hoodwinked

    She certainly has had a hard time. So much turnoil all at once. Sometimes life is hard but we can't give up because something great might come along and then we miss it.
  • Very enjoyable read! Great job!


  • debilynn gold member
    May 18

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    HOODWINKED!!!

    heartfelt write filled with love and friendship and prayers. i commend you for sharing Gods' Word on here. you are quite creative. an inspiration for your friend. thank you for sharing your kind heart. keep writing! God bless you always
    sorry i am late with this

  • Hood-Wink!

    Wonderful write and authors notes, you dug in deep and spread love, friendship and prayers

    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • The title says it all.

    The third stanza is so right on point. God is with her. Very uplifting words, fellow poet. Thanks so much for entering.

  • Lady Mak
    May 17

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    A beautiful sincere heartfelt write

    This is a very caring and sincere write, wonderful encouragement for your dear friend Mylee. You reassure your loved friend of all the wonderful friends who love her, and you encourage her to draw strength from God through excellent use of the faith stregthening and upbuilding scriptures found at Isaiah 41:10, and Phillipians 4:13.

    How blessed your friend is to have such caring friends to love and support her, and for you dear On.Fire.4.Christ. to encourage her from Gods Holy Words from the Bible.


  • tawk gold member
    May 17

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    Uplifting!

    What a beautiful write so full of love and hope for dear Mylee. This is what she so needs to hear and feel. Nikki thanks for writing this for her. I too am so lucky to know you both and have you both in my life. Such an inspiring and uplifting write! I too believe that all who enter a poem here are winners in my book to thanks again love and hugs Theresa


  • QuietPort
    May 17

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    Beautiful write! I also liked the scripture noted
    Very comforting.
    good luck!
    when you think of it all who entered here are winners

  • Bob Fox
    May 16
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    Hearts

    Some hearts are special and all i can say is that I am proud that I knoe both young ladies

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