dont talk shit
if im supposed to be ok with it
you bring up the bad
it makes me mad
but im suppose to smile in their face
when they enter our space
it just doesnt work that way
stupid motherfuckers deserve to pay
you got me wanting to rip that bitch a new ass
but when i see her im suppose to let it pass
fuck that shit
im going to punch that bitch
next time she crosses my path
ill kick her in the head then laugh
your the reason all of this anger started
so dont look at me like i am cold hearted
when she comes around and i get pissed
in a way i feel dissed
and you continue to talk shit and tell me the stupid shit she does
how am i in the wrong for getting an anger buzz
i dont want to hear about it any more
dont talk to me about that whore
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woot!
this was straight foward... very angsty write! keep pening... and doesnt it just feel soo good to let it all out?
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whoa
well, you definitely got yer anger across XD i felt that. good way to let teh stress go. good job
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Jerry! Jerry! lol
no, for real though, you've displayed your emotions (particularly anger) in very demanding, attention-grabbing sort of way and I like it.
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a good piece, it is good to get the anger off the chest and writing poetry is a great way to release the frustrations felt.
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WOW!
I can tell you that your anger shows in this work. Emotional and plenty of bunnies to go around. Good work. Hope everything will be all right!
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Fiya burn!
Wooo damn, I feel that! You need to drop a beat to that shit! Don't two faced mofo's make ya crazy? A roaring lion behind they back, then a little sweet pussy cat to they face. And you're expected to do the same? LOL
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