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[ You left me alone ]

You left me alone
a soul lost without a path
shattered and confused
you played with my heart
toyed with my feelings
you left me blank
and now anger posseses me
lined with sadness
i will hate you forever
i will hate you with my love

its not much i wanted to test it though i consider it a start any comments?

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  • BloodFader
    May 19
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    this is love in its purest form.. lethal but addictive when turned to hate...


  • Spiritual Soul
    May 18

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This was great, I really liked the last line. Wonderful job, very emotional. Keep it up!

    If you have any questions feel free to ask me!

    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • DeSiBoO14
    May 18

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    wOw!!DiS hAs AlOt Of EmOtIoN!!mY fAvOriTe PaRt WaS
    "i will hate you forever
    i will hate you with my love"
    gReAT wRiTe!!


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    May 18

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    pretty good and welcome to AP......... thanks for sharing the words of your heart...... nice to met you...

  • xxwhatsherfacexx
    May 17
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    this is pretty good...
    i really like the line "i will hate you with my love"...

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