we checked in in this school as babies
years from then, now, we face opportunities
what to do? what to choose?
we've had help, you've given us clues
the road has been rocky
hasn't been all smooth
these times make the history
of a journal full of truth
15 years, and now we stand right here
immature kids have become of no fear
time flew fast, we took no notice
now we reminisce the past which we will surely miss
we've laughed n we've cried
we've frowned n we've smiled
we've tasted the bitterness of tears
when letting go of friends we hold so dear
the bad times were overwhelming, compared to the ones that were good
still, we surpassed them, the way you all said we would
congratulations, we've come this far
just a step now, from our getaway car
congratulations, tomorrow's a new day
today's a present, yesterday's to be cherished alwayz
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thnxxxxx allllll
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Welcome To Allpoetry
Hello SweetZsKuLLy
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You did a wonderful job here..
Your words flowed very well and you created a very "real life" image here as well..I hope to read more from you soon. If you ever have any questions regarding the site please contact me or any other Site Greeter..
Keep up the great work!
Jetleena
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yayyy sis
sis i told your ur a great poet see this is what proves that you really are
nice write sis i wonoder how promes are like:S
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Good write
It captures the emotions very well and puts them on paper so that others can feel the same way you do good job on this write! keep writing! -
Very nice. At first intriguing (still intriguing at the ned for me) but it makes me think about everything you've written and thinking can't be bad, right? Thanks for this moment of thinking offered then
Kaelin
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Superb
A very fine write, indeed. Broght back poignant memories and caused a chuckle or two. Keep on writing, you've got talent.
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cool write.. brought back memories of school days heh..
hope u'l post some more soon
~rana~
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