red is the color of blood
pain
hate
vinegar
agony
all that u gave me
when u said u didnt love me
anymore
Author notes
my first poem be nice
A contest entry
- Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 107 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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holy lord almighty, ...bwhahahhahaahhaaha
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Well, for your lst poem - and such few words - you did well with the emotion. Make sure to save this one, so months from now you can look back on it to see how much your writing has changed..lol
best wishes
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Great!
Good luck in my contest!
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wow, this is great for a first poem! i loved how passionate it was.. you put into words what many cant, by just naming words. well done!!
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Wow. Very raw. I love how in so little, you were able to express so much. 23 words that dripped with emotion, and pulled you on to the end. You've put into words, what I'm sure many of us have felt, and wished we could pen ourselves. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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You have said so much in so few words. This is powerful and speaks of your pain. you did a great job! Keep writing poet! Patty
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