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[Dear Moonlight ]

This feeling you give me...
a possesion of power, a sense of direction
the sound of your gentle whisper and the blow of subtle breeze
the mere stillness and quiet of your being screams serenity
the clear black skies lined with moon-lit sighs
your partner, night surrounds you but lets you stand out
and let your presence known
your existence acknowledged
your sight wrapped in pale purity and luminescent beauty
beckons me into the embrace of your sanctuary
a state of power, of splashed divinity
your illuminated touch, your cool kisses
engulfing my senses
cleansing my thoughts and washing away my current troubles
making my blood flow more freely, my body weightless
a combination like no other...
i let go,
temporary freedom.

its not much i wanted to test it though i consider it a start any comments?

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  • BloodFader
    May 19

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    this is amazing.. i thik u might like some of my work and my friend (Thegirlinblack)'s work if ur up for it...


  • Hekate gold member
    May 19

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    Welcome To AP

    Hello XAmongTheDyingSoulsX,

    I loved the imagery in this piece. I can for sure why letting go at something like that would only bring temporary freedom.


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