and i will never see you again, i fear
you will though remain the one i hold so dear
and the nights are dark when you're not here, with me
you'll alwayz be my reason to breathe
and this time, forever, i won't see of u
how much i love you, you'll have no clue
and the days will never be mine, again i know
my heart will be in your hands, wherever u go
and this time is the last
the time has passed so fast
i already miss you
how can i go on without your smile?
your gentle words and your beautiful eyes?
how can i deal with goodbye?
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oh and thanks rana for the comment..
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yea bro.. this is ONE of my "let me put the books away and write in class" poems.. w kovi tasarane kides ov gella mishd! :S
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Some nice rhyme in this! I noticed though a break in your rhyme scheme in the last stanza. Lines 3 and 4 don't rhyme. A small thing but it distracts from a wonderful poem! I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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very heartfelt..
u knew exactly how to get ur emotions thru to the reader with simple yet very sincere and touching words..
i guess everyone can relate to this in their own way..
great job
~rana~
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oh sis:S:S so saddd:S is this for da teach? i can totally relate this i guess it refers to my friend too:S knats hon menats:S:s
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