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Pity Love

never been fair
you hurt the only one who cares
because you've been hurt
and you cant take the pain
you said you'd never play in the dirt
here you are, playing their game

making up excuses
false promises
just to protect their heart
and help them stand instead of falling apart
cause when the sky gets dark
the burden gets heavier to hold
and the love we believe in never gets told

it is now a love of pity
intentioned not to hurt a soul
ends up killing somebody whole, eventually
you've had it done to you
and you've done it to a lover too
and that person will never forgive you
and will never again love you

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  • thank you both.. i appreciate it !

  • xhellovee
    May 24
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    The last part was my favorite :]
    But the whole piece was amazing.
  • I like the part that starts off with: making up excuses///false promises//just to protect their hearts. That is ver nice...and the rest of it too.