is this real enough for you?
you want me to cut my wrist and show you how it bleeds?
you want me to cut myself and show you how the blood goes through my veins?
you want to see how it bleeds and how it feels?
how it kills and there's no way back from that??
when you're dead then your dead
you want to see how i'm killing myself?
is this real enough for you?
are you convinced that there's no more life in me
that what i'm breathing is not air
and what i'm feeling is just accompanied with misery?
what do i got to do
to get through to you???
is this real enough for you?
if you want something more i can give it to you
want to see how the blood is boiling in me?
want to see how the alcohol is in my system, wanna see?
don't hesitate
i'll book you a date
a date with my fate
i won't fight it
i'll let you witness it
see how it kills
and death is not something pretty
when you see life parting me
is this real enough for you?
or you want to taste every drop of blood
pouring down as i fall
and part this life forever to never stand tall
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thnxxxx for all the comments.. and yes bro.. i have read your poem.. i think i've read ALL of them hehe
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there are a lot of feelings in this poem and I thought it is was very emotional, like a scream. I am glad I stopped by to read your poetry. ... thanks for sharing your writing with us.
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wow, this seem so sad, great poem it showed alot of emotions
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Alot of pain and heartache coming through loud and clear! You get your point across very well in this.
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what more do they want for a lover to do so they believe that the love is true and pure:S
"she's no woman so far i've known
rather a heartless senseless stone"
how do you expect a stone to feel the pain and agony that you're going true it crushes into bits and pulverizes and still won't feel a thing so hearts are as cruel as thattt
STOp i say, stop i pray
i demand and pleadd,
can't you see how i bleed
doesn't this tickle anything in you?:
how i drench in tears and blue
you cut my soul in two
what more you want to do
this heart that beats is just dead
in caustic tears clad
it beats but yet lifeless it stays
and for your pity it prays
STop this madness there's not a drop of life in me
stop at this instance and let me be
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speechless hun ( and thats hard to do) i loved the pain, emotion, and feelngs flowing of this page. this is amazing!
christina
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