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Pixie Snack

there's a pixie in the bathtub

gore

I didn't do it
I didn't do this


yet the soft squelch pleased him
as he peeled her
a sound like duct tape tearing
as he tore tissue from her temples

it's just meat
nothing but meat


he met her sparkling at the bar
9:12 PM

she had rubbed dark lipstick
over not enough lip
her leopard print mini rode high on her thigh

drugged and drunk she was easy prey
he stuffed her into the passenger seat
once home he spirited her to the bathroom
propped her in a palace of painter's plastic 
bled her there
10:48 PM

acrid, salty elixir
don't take too much 
remember last time


he giggled glibly
thought

there’s a pixie in the bathtub

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The Darkness.

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  • Forgiven73
    July 9
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    Well Done

    This is very dark...chilling almost. especially the lines:

    he giggled glibly
    thought

    there's a pixie in the bathtub

    Best of luck in the contest