Hearts of glass
shatter
in churning tides
past
melting icicles
beneath the cresting waves
drip stinging salt in open wounds
sharks circling,
feverishly pacing,
jaws open wide for vulnerable souls
Author notes
Picture credit:
http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Make-Me-Feel-68298211
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A contest entry
- Pic prompt semi quickie.... it's me again !!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 20, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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congrats on well deserved silver........ i like this... damn the haunting past... thanks for sharing !!
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Congratulations on an awesome poem
Captured me thats for sure
Julie
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Congrats on silver!!
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Mannn this was amazing.. you are sooo on a roll lately with these quickies. Love your take on this with the idea of sharks consuming vulnerable souls. Pure brilliance & beautiful imagery!! Keep it up hun! Good luck in Jacks' contest!
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Fab imagery in this.. it all came together to make a poem that really is grasping! So many vulnerable souls are swallowed by the churning tides of past for sure. Love this take
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