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sandman calling.

i sense your exhaustion before you even signal a yawn. your words slowly stumble, beginning to slur, your defenses and sarcastic attitude weaken. i imagine your eyelashes kissing the single freckle taking refuge on your left cheekbone [the freckle i so badly want to press my lips against.] your responses diminish, dwindling from lengthy argumentative responses to simple "mhm's" as you fight to stay alert.

when you get this way, your voice becomes a deep whisper, a lisped lullaby [on repeat] for my eardrums.

conversation evaporates as quickly as my words leave the corners of my mouth, only to hang suspended in midair. i sneak secrets into the spaces between the rise and fall of your chest as you inhale and exhale.


chatterbox boy calms and turns to soft radio static, a likeness to the way elevator music unexpectedly fades into lemon and honey tea [without sugar cubes] for insomniacs at three a.m.


your nose crinkles and twitches as you're pulled further into a dream and the sound of my voice familiarizes itself against your unconsciousness;


"goodnight my sweet boy with words like warm wine."

Author notes

this is the product of writer's block, a diet of energy drinks, and the palpitations of my heart when i hear the voice of my darling chatterbox boy. the sound of his breathing puts me at ease.

>.<

remember me when you sleep tonight.

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  • "i imagine your eyelashes kissing the single freckle taking refuge on your left cheekbone [the freckle i so badly want to press my lips against.]"
    FUCKING BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

    hey, I wish I could write so stunningly on writer's block! if I could, I would be happy to get writer's block hahaha.

    I loved the personal feel of this poem. when the reader falls into it, they're still on the outside because only you and him. I just love that.

    <3333333

  • This is pretty. I love it.

    "chatterbox boy calms and turns to soft radio static, a likeness to the way elevator music unexpectedly fades into lemon and honey tea [without sugar cubes] for insomniacs at three a.m."


    Favorite. Writer's block doesn't really seem to effect you. I love your writing..it's pretty.