kill me romanticly
kiss me slowly as my breath fades away
stab me pashonitly
lick my blood from my body
bite my neck as i slowly hit the ground
lie beside me in the puddle of my own blood
whipe the tearz from my face as you stair into my eyes
kill me romanticly
-bre hart
tell me ur thoughts???
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that was totally awesomeness
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Sounds like a vampire love story... ITS AWEZOMEZ!!!
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:S ohhhh me likey lol its weird, which makes it awsum! good job
xoxo- christina
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First off, you do have quite a few typos, so you might want to address those and make corrections were needed.
I liked this piece though, had a creepy love sort of feel to it.
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"kill me romantically"~*
this reminds me of that Ludo song, lol. Ever heard of it? .__.
Well, anyway ^.^ I like this. Its not like other love poems [
] But hey.. thats a good thing =]
Seth
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whaoo... this is very good and interesting
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Painful and Naughty...
PERFECT COMBINATION =D smex. lol very nice very very nice *claps like a retard*
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Whoa Bre
I love this!
yeah gawd!
Use spell check, for once!
Ha just kidding
I love the line
"kill me romanticly"
That's from the song...Love Me Dead.
Anyway great poem
love ya
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nice
its really nice. my favorite line was "kill me romantically, kiss me slowly as my breath fades away" very pretty. -
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Stunning
I loved the way you made the poem feel dangerously sexy and dark my Lady of the Night x Gave me chills x Could use spell check though hun x
I paricularly liked:
"stab me pashonitly
lick my blood from my body" -
It was cute, and I liked it, would be tons better if the words were all spelled right, taht kinda took away from the emotions, but you can feel the emotion you put into the poem.
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