Your arms are the blanket that surround me
Your kisses are the breath of life to me
You heart beat next to mine helps it grow stronger
Without you my world would crumble.
The wind that gently caresses us
helps the love flow ever more
to dance with you when stars are bright
a deam come true is what you are.
Never would my sun shine
Never would the wind caress
Never would the star twinkle
if you were not here by my side
But now times are great
you are here, you are near
joined hand to hand
I ask that question to you
for you too understand and know
My life is yours to keep,
I will never let you weep
Will you be mine for ever more.
Author notes
This is too my girl, I told her I didnt want her but yet this is still true.
What do you think of my poetry?
Comments
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EXCELLENT!!
tom, it's me... and well, as i already said to you, this is very beautiful!! i know how u really feel about her, but u shouldnt suffer yourself for that... i know u will be ok, i know it!! u cannot say u dont write well, cause this piece of yours is lovely!!! and the love runs out of it like water =)
i actually believe yours are better than mine =)
i would love somebody would write something like this to me... but, my boy doesnt even want to be my boyfriend :S
u should be happy u still have lots of people that loves you!!
well, i hope u get better and stop thinking about her, please!!!
see some of mine if u have time =)
i love ya lots!! honestly!!
kisses
good luck
keep up to the good writing =)
DO MAGIC
(* pau
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