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A cup full of joy.
A spoonful of delight.
Take me home with you.
Let me spend the night.

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 25

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    I like your reference to a person as a cupful of joy and a spoonful of delight! Clever!
    Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene


  • transit
    May 25

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    ooo

    This is an interesting take on the prompt but sweet all the more. I like how you described the spoon. no one else did. The imagery is good too. Good luck!

    transit~


  • creationsfromheart silver member
    May 24
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    Aw a beautiful little rhyme, Good luck

  • Amy-Peridot-Pixi
    May 24

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    this poem is really cute, i love the title, the flow and also the background i love how you have took that promt and made it so beautiful, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the great writing, -Amy