Staring at this photograph reminds me of you.
Water gushes from the pipe to fill the pool below
Just like you moving inside to fill me up.
The rust in the water reminds of blood down your back
The excitement I felt with each pulse of your body moving with mine
Teeth marks on your shoulders, a love bite on my neck
My fingers raise involuntarily to the place
It's raw and still bleeding
That's first rate sex.
My hand moves down to the bruise on my arm
Where, in the heat of the moment, it caught the edge of the nightstand
Ah, pain is the price for supreme pleasure!
A shiver rumbles down my spine as I remember last night.
Two bodies, like wave, moving together with perfect cadence.
Love me harder! came your voice to my ears and I obeyed.
Like a horse in a race, every muscle screaming with adrenaline
Agile and alluring, the beast within me screamed
That's first rate sex.
A contest entry
- The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
3000 points, ended August 26, 1977 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked it! I think you captured the passions and raw emotions quite well! Greatly enjoyed reading this! keep up the good work.
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all right -
no- this is not good stuff
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enlighten me.
why do you think that? I'm curious as to why you dislike it.
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I have to have a slight giggle at your Authors Notes
You have indeed penned quite a write, deep metaphors and strong imagery this certainly holds erotica in a new light
Best of luck
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Stay safe
~Manda
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thanks!
I am glad you enjoyed it! It takes a good write to know a good piece, yes?
Happy writing!
The Famous Reese Bailey
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