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Golden Treasure (rough draft)

Shimmering rays
warm her soft skin.
her Golden Hair
sways gently, caught in
a pleasant breeze.
Peaceful she is this treasure
I have found.
Breathless she leaves me
as I gaze into her eyes. 
I'm captivated with in her deep wells,
swirling in vibrant colors.
Under a midnight moon
her golden hair softly glows
Illuminating the dreary night.
Like a beacon in the night sky
her glows with endless life.
My gaze never leaves her,
for everything else pales
to her beautiful warming light.
Her smile is my blanket of joy
and her laughter the song
of my heart and soul,
this living work of art
this Golden Treasure of Mine

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  • What can I say about this one? I know it isn't about me. ha ha I do not have Golden Hair. Makes me sad. JK That you do not write about me. Keep them coming I will be waiting patiently for your next write. ~~Shannon~~


  • nell
    June 8

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    awwh this is just beautiful and romantic, your words embrace like song of the heart so enchanting and full of love and its just a rough draft? well i can just imagine the polished piece! GREAT WORK hun