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Flames in the Water

We are glorious and naked.
The water swirls about us
As you penetrate me roughly.
We move back and forth making our own waves.
The water is shallow here and we are all but immersed in it
I feel the sand at my back as I breathe in your ear.
Harder, I plead.
You push deeper within me and I let out a moan.
My teeth find your skin.
A sharp intake of breath
Lets me know I've found the spot.
You lift me up from the water
And I wrap my legs about your body.
My lips find yours as you walk to our blanket
In the shade of a palm tree.
We lay back down and move faster this time,
For there's no fear of drowning here.
You pull away to catch your breath
And I pull you into my mouth.
It tastes so good that I make you peak for me.
Your turn, you whisper and my legs embrace your neck.
Your tongue finds its favorite place
My body convulses, bathing your face with love's sweet nectar.
You're more excited now as you plunge back in
Moving so fast you breathing comes in short bursts.
We kiss again, like they say the French do,
And the ambrosia of sex tastes even sweeter than before.
Alas! Our fervor doesn't end here!
Back to the ocean's warm waters we run
Just in time for round two.

Author notes

This virgin's got skill!

Photo inspired. Photo credit: Wet by Artstruggles

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  • pssh!

    I got DQ'd from the contest.

  • Lexie
    May 24

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    lol. i really like the author's notes. this virgin's got skill! other then that, i liked the poem to. very very vivid. We kiss again, like they say the French do, was a very very good line.

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    now I see the line limit.

  • maralisa gold member
    May 24

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    Bathing your face with love's sweet nectar.
    You're more excited now as you plunge back in
    Moving so fast you breathing comes in short bursts.
    We kiss again,
    Like they say the French do
    And the ambrosia of sex tastes
    Even sweeter than before.
    Alas!
    Our fervor doesn't end here!
    Back to the ocean's warm waters we run
    Just in time for round two.wow this is hot hot hot good luck in the contest

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