Dear my beloved,
I just wanted to say
I love you dearly and
Thanks for walking into
My life unexpectedly
Your precious touch
Makes me shiver all over
I love how you kiss me
So passioned and understanding
When you talk to me
My heart just races
Making me want
To skip a beat twice
As fast
The moments we share together
It will last
Forever and always
We will make it last
Our bond is strong
Our love is pure
Each time I see you
I get butterflies
In my stomach
You're the best thing
That walked into my life
I thank god for having you
For showing you love me
Pouring your kindess
All over me
As it turns to dust
Getting inside me
Filling my broken heart
With all your kindness and love
Making million pieces rejoin and
Burst inside me making
Me want to scream
Your name out loud
In the middle of nowhere
You always make me feel special
I love you forever and always will
You're my everything send from above
Author notes
I used to feel this until you disapped =/
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So beautiful, what a lovely write.
Sorry you no longer feel like this 
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wow if only we could all find this in our lifes, well me im still waiting boo hoo!!
anyway i really enjoyed reading this it gives me hope that there are some good people put there.
all the best. -
wow
can iuse this to ask a girl out. perfect
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Hehe really that's awesome and thanks
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I really liked the way this was written, but I have to admit that the way you spaced out the lines to make them so short got a little annoying. The phrases seemed chopped and I think would flow smoother if combined together in the right places. Your emotions expressed here are beautiful.
Pouring your kindess
All over me
As it turns to dust
Getting inside me
Filling my broken heart
With all your kindness and love
Making million pieces rejoin and
Brust inside me making
Me want to scream
Your name out loud
In the middle of nowhere
lovely metaphor. (might wanna fix brust to burst though)
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Aww, I can see why this is one of your favorites :] It's so beautiful, dear, and full of so much truth & love. It's great that you have somebody like this in your life ! ♥
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I simply
d this! awesome feelings! 
Your a finalist! take care,
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wow what a beautiful poem full of loving emotions from a loved heart touching the reader heart as the emotions travel up and down the ink spilled words beautiful poem
I enjoyed the following stanzas
Thanks for walking into My life unexpectly Your precious touch Makes me shiver all over I love how you kiss meSo passioned and understanding When you talk to meMy heart just races Getting inside me Filling my broken heart With all your kindness and love good luck in the contest
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This was wonderfully written and I loved the emotions shown in it. Well done.
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Ah...the strings of love and the music of the heart is heart in the every word of this verwse..well done..my thanks for sharing it
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=] Awwwh!!!! xD RyanxMaria! >.> Sitting in a Tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!! ^_^ Hehe
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Deadfix right now