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Through This Eye

Missing image

~by Gregg Rowe~

100 Word Challenge

 



Hazel iris --

     forty-eight today, March Twelfth

Mirrored reflection --

      me looking at me

I see my future artistically like fine lines creating crow's feet

Seeing --

      these fine lines as art

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Crow's feet

      living with HIV, Hep C, heart condition

      my real life fine lines

 


Art imitates life as

       art beauty transcends into everyday life:

 

 


I am fortunate to explore this through my sight.

Refelction of fine lines through light in art --

enabling to see my darkness of my hazel eyes--

as well as fine contours of my crow's feet




Much like the lightness

      and darkness in everday living

How bittersweet.



May 26, 2008

100 Word Stories: Winners Week 15 (Gatherversary Special Edition) & New Prompt Week 16  by ♥♥ reena d.   

http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.jsp?articleId=281474977352466



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  • Terry-too silver member
    June 3
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    Evocative

    Beauty in its patterns, drawn by independent forces held firmly at a distance to guarantee delicacy of form, a kind of counter strength as if in the hand of an artist who respects his medium, using the application of time as flux. Master-craftsman at work.

    Proof that mighty bridges need not be built to find a worthy poem. . .
    terry

  • mmmm... very good.
  • *dEEP*

    WOW- very Artist...
    well written*****

  • erica9277
    May 27
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    i really liked this peom. it is brillantly written. i enjoyed readingthis
  • Raven Rose
    May 27
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    cool.....

    i really like how you see your future... or present?..... it is truley artistic in every way.....
  • those damn crows feet i liked this yet im strangely unsure why, oh what the hell... i guess thats a good thing

    . Rewarded 4

  • wow!

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