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Laying Here....

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Laying here,
Not knowing when next I'll be here,
Longing for your touch yet;
Watching your chest rise and fall;
As you sleep away the labours of the day,
Tears roll down my cheeks as I remember;
Tomorrow I leave and return to,
That place that is meant to be home,
Reminded of the perils that await,
The brother that torments;
Kills my spirit and shares himeself...

I lay here longing to stay forever,
knowing that my home is here; with you,
I continue to watch as you twitch,
Asking you questions and hearing;
that cute muffled answer,
I never can make out what you say.

Meandering through these final hours,
In lovers eyes I watch you rest,
Clear is my head of all negative thoughts,
Hearing your gentle breaths of slumber,
Along with the snuffles of a distant dream,
Endlessly wishing this time wouldn't end
Leaving you here... I'll return soon, back to you...

                                                              Where I belong.

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  • aww this bought a tear to my eyes hun,
    you look so sweet together, and well this was amazingly shockingly beautiful written poem, ima add it to my fave poems list because i love this one i really do!
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

  • xhellovee
    June 7
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    Very sweet. Great write :]
  • Oh sweety! He's gorgeous!Lol,

    This is so very sweet.
    Haven't heard from you in a while, are you doing ok?

    Hope you're brill.

    Great poem doll.
    Sophie.
    x

  • beautiful sis i love you
  • Keep him close always, and you'll never truly be without him, honey. I love you.

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