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Boom

So cold cast when damp
Our eyes can catalyze
Can chastity fall into reverse?
When we spoke, nay, we were one, now diverse.

Melodic melee in tongue
Despite the words we sang
I am well tuned, in notes I am so -
Why does this lack of conversation hang?

I'm sharp as shotguns, I am too loathed
In my aim I do slay, to my use i'm betrothed
I'm weightly, and may not seem fair, but -
I do amass in love and care
You can take me anywhere
You can take me, unaware.















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  • Winterfall
    May 30

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    'Can chastity fall into reverse?,' this line made me chuckle. And the lines 'Melodic melee in tongue
    Despite the words we sang', they actually cooked up this image in my head of a melee in a fight, but with words and music notes fighting instead of weapons. I get the impression that you are talking directly to somebody like an argument happened or something and you just wrote it out on here to get everything out.