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You Watch Me Suffer and Hold Me Tighter

I cry
blood tears
for you
but you
can't seem
to let
me go.
Please, darling,
I want
To live.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 10

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    wow!

    your words were very deep... it was simple, short and powerful with emotions! amazing write... keep penning kays!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 9

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    This is really sad congrats on your hm and goodluck in the other comtest that you have entered much love always


  • Sundown Dragon silver member
    May 30
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    very nice

  • Blooming Poet gold member
    May 30

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    You should make the title the first line and then it would make more sense. great poem though anyway.