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Afternoon Glittering's


Lightly powdered places
of perfumed delicacies

titillated
with
anticipation

unfolded/folded into a pile of tingling shadows
draped--quenched
cross moisten sheets

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  • Sensual Angel gold member
    June 1

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    this is a very hot and steamy poem. you did an excellent job with the prompt. Hot definitely..

    good luck

    k


  • KayJay silver member
    June 1

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    What imagery! Very nicely portrayed. (Pardon me while I unsteam my glasses )... Well done.
    Ken