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The Ache

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I remember,
showers of pleasure
hands arching backs
tongues searching

skin on skin

touching souls
eyes that drowned
in pools of desire
while lust lathered
against all of you

safe

now; bent in ache
as nature sheds
tears of want

wet again

 

I remember

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 9

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    I dare say I felt the ache, in this..So sensually written Juls...beautiful writing

    Hope you do well

    Cin


  • azlyn gold member
    June 7

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    Heated passion and lustful desire...lovely! Thank you so much for the entry and very best of luck!!!


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 6

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    Hell, I hardly remember showers?
    My mother used to plop me on a rock-
    and pound me in the stream-

    but regardless



    Wow, a lathering write-
    Or is that-
    Leathering write?
    Frothing emotions-
    Whipped to a frenzy-

    And then-
    Comes the-
    Water bill-




    Len



  • NurseChilly gold member
    June 6

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    you got a D too... ?? damn... there's a few of 'em about..

    this is... sensuous and divinely delving.. nice

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