words are meaningless
when night covers lips
in silent prayers
In a list
A contest entry
- don't be cliche by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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so beautifully grasping and incredibly deep... x
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Some think if you can't see them say it then they didn't. So leave the lights on.


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The first two lines played beautifully off each other and the ending just polished off the whole thing nicely. best of luck to you!


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taiinfinite
very deep and so true good luck






