hey girl don't say goodbye even though we're apart we're never alone i've got ya in my heart and you got me in yours so we're not really apart now are we?
so say say temparay bye for now and hello hello hello in the future
we've got only 8-11 years apart but then we've got the rest of our lives together forever
and that's all i want is for you to stop crying i'm not worth it really save tears for joy not sadness please but if you really have to i've got a shoulder open for you
cause your my only girl
my woman
my lover
i love you till the end and i'll always say "well hello dere" because i love you so much i can't stand to see you cry
i'd have to sit down and start crying myself
cause that's another weakness if someone crys that i really care about i'll start crying too.
but it's okay i promise my words in this already but my vow is to not look at another girl cause i need to train a little anyway to be able to come back that is if i can come back before 9 years to fight off guy to be able to take you and forget the past and live in the present with you
because i love you girl i wanna be your protector and i will become your protector later in the future it may seem a little big sure unbelievable but nothings to big and nothings to hard if you put your mind it and keep on fighting to be strong
cause i've got in the bag and i'm gonna win this all tough battle and i'm gonna have you with me after that so don't cry my little woman because we'll be together *smile* yes we will
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wow, that reminds me of my situation now only I don't have to wait like 8 years, nice write
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Hi there!
I'm so glad you have a place to share this dilemma. It's very conversational and honest.
Lots of funny parts as well.
If you'd like a form critique on this, I would
suggest that you clip the phrases to a more uniform
shape and recheck the spelling. The spellchecker is our friend.
I'm sure the recipient appreciates such sweet
thoughts from your pen. Thank you for sharing!
Warmly, CookieZeal
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promice. forever?
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yes mame
heck yeah i do i promise i vow and you got my word on this
i sollomly vow on the boxing code of conduct that i really do mean it when i say yes i promise for ever AND EVER
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