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Walking Nature's Path

My windscreen is a boundary wall

on deaf eyes nature's sounds do fall,

I must walk out and breathe it all

for I am small, for I am small.

 

 

Within creation I must dwell

rest on the sand, listen to shells

inhaling all these precious smells

I'm in a spell, I'm in a spell.

 

 

I am in awe of all I see

and long with creatures to be free,

the sounds of birds within the trees

they hum to me, they hum to me.

 

 

And every creature has its song

in harmony we all belong,

this is what makes creation strong

let's walk along, let's walk along.

 

 

A lifetime journey this will take

to natures call we will awake

we must not make any mistakes

in peace partake, in peace partake.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Monotetra Form

8. "The longest journey begins with a single step, not with the turn of an ignition key." –The Journey Home

- Edward Abbey

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  • penman gold member
    June 20
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    Wonderful

    Such a fantastic creation. So very deserving of the gold. Congratulations.

  • Great!

    I like the form; and content.

  • Wow...had a little tune in my head and a spring in my step...so lite and carefree is this stunning work. Absolutely love the rhythm and flow, both are complemented by the beautiful and unforced rhyme. Simply gorgeous. All the best sis

    Shaz xx