I'll have you stand very, very still
as I force the virginal pear through your entrance.
I'll lap up your juices of agony
like a starved kitten infront of a milkbowl.
I'll have you stand with eyes wide open
as I, while licking bruised lips, cut off your clitoris.
Earlier while you were sleeping,
I performed a greedy abortion.
Earlier while you were sleeping,
I cooked and ate your unborn child.
Author notes
I felt like entering with this one as well.
I do hope it's alright.
A contest entry
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Very... different.
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AMAZING!!!!
HAHA, FUCKIN A!
this is sooo great, short, brutal, gory and to the point. Very sick and twisted,
yet intriguing
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Yes, well this is what I do best, dear.
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ooh this is dark me likey! its so sick and damn your fucking amazing and i dont ever know you i just know you write so damn good, your offically one of my favourite authors on here, ive yet to find more sick killer writers like us on here, but wow this is amazing, so dark and sick and just twisted, ooh i fucking love it, im in my comfort zone here
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Ah! I'm flattered with a smile plastered on my face like a 2yearold with an eyeball lollipop, honest!
Comfort zone? What a wonderful choice of words! -
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well glad to make you smile tis always nice,
yes my comfort zone bathed in blood and smothered in mud, and sugar coated in leather
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Suger coated in leather, eh?
How humourous!
Although, I do, from the heel of my shoe to the tip of my tophat, I repeat, I do understand what you mean.
A little blood never hurt anyone... Ah! Such a paradox, though...
I rant.
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oh yeah leather rocks...but right now i have a bandage on my shoulder so i cant wear my leather corset because the white bandage and black corset clash too much its annoying *Smiles*
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Ö ! Oh! The jealousy! The immense amount of jealousy! YOu have a leather corset!
I joyfully suffer from a corset fetish, though I only have one...
I must note though, that I believe black and white compliment eachother...
Also, if I may inquire as to why you have a bandage on your shoulder, out of curiousity? -
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i broke my shoulder doing a gymnastics show 2 nights ago, hurt my back too but im back in work, im a fighter i dont not go in work, unless i had my legs cut off which wouldnt happen in my average day you know?
aww *hugs you* i have many corsets but they are very expensive, i have over 300 and they costed alot, but ive had a fasinacation since i was 15 so ive been collecting since then, -
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My fascination started about 2-3 years ago... I was 13, I think when it started, so yes it was 3 years ago.
I'll get some... I swear I will! *shakes fist in vow* I simply must! But, yes I'm aware they're expensive... It's a bit of a pity, but at least you get something for your money!
If one got ones legs cut off on what that person would consider average day, I wonder what else that person has been through? Haha!
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I'm not even going to comment on this.
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Ah! Such a paradox, saying you're not going to comment in a comment!
Can I ask why?
Or perhaps I shall take a guess and say that it was my poem that offended you somehow.... In which case I'd like to know how so.
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