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Far above...

Far above the light blue sky,

is where you lie,

watching the world,

turning to cry.

 

Seeing nothing but war,

and blood,

seeing all the bad,

but where is all the good?

 

Sit outside and listen,

what do you hear?

Sirens,

Trouble always near.

 

 

Far above the light blue sky,

is where you lie,

seeing only the good,

Trouble, is never near.

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  • slick99
    August 31

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    this is nothing short of beautiful. keep up the good work!!! thanks for sharing. -slick99
  • Wrinkling Mind silver member
    July 6

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    This is a nice thought, it's nice and comforting to think we all go to a happy place after we die. love the last stanza, nice.

  • stavykm gold member
    July 1

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    Wow

    This is true God does see it all and I'm sure it brings tears to his eyes. This is an excellent poem and to the point.

    Far above the light blue sky,
    is where you lie,
    seeing only the good,
    Trouble, is never near.

    Won't that be grand to be in Heaven soon someday for we then will not have to see what we see and feel today. Beautiful job.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 28

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    He sees it all........

    The good the bad and the ugly!!! There is much badness out there and ugliness as well, but there is goodness his name is Jesus!!! His holy spirit dwells among us and there will always be more goodness than bad until he comes and takes the goodnes from the earth {his church} leaving only darkness and chaos. Ithink sometimes we only see the badness because it has becoming more shocking with each passing day! That is just how things seem to be...you did an awesome job writing this and you are very accomplished despite your young age!!!~~Thanks for sharing~~ Toni~~

  • PianoMan
    June 25

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    Nice poem. It makes me think of my relatives who have moved on and how they don't have to endure the pains of this world anymore.

  • CountryCousin
    June 24

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    Whimsical.

    This piece is serious but has a whimsical side to it. It states the reality of many situations but ends with a note of hope to it. Nicely done.


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    June 23

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    Intensely honest, this is a wake up call for those who seem to be able to close their eyes and ears and pretend it isn't there.

    Great write hun
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


  • Warrior-Eagle
    June 22

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    Wow. This is really good.
    I would love to go farup there,
    where there won't be any more troubles hehe.
    Nice job

    ...Simply Me♥
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