There is no action stronger then words
For words are actions never heard,
Pushing past feeble will
Through your mind and digits they do spill,
And though they might never occur
Doubtfully, actions speak louder then words?
Talk can be cheap
While sodden trust weeps
From fulfilling unfulfillment
Leaving souls to dent
Further out of shape,
Battered hopes with lies to make,
Surely soon their want will break
And drown them in the flood to take
As words create the wounded fate.
So actions speak louder then words?
Actions wound my pride?
Actions destort my time?
Before twisted minds complete their crimes
And warp a fragile desperate kind?
No...
Not this time.
Author notes
Everyone always says actions speak louder then words, but which is really stronger to our hearts?
I wonder...
Honesty is always appreciated
Comments
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wow
This was an excellent poem!It captured my attention from the beginning!wonderful piece!
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I love your rhyming scheme. It makes it sound like a minstrel's poem, which is interesting since this is the sort of thing they would discuss. Although the entire poem was great and strong, I think the first bit was the best.
And I completely agree with you on this debate. An interesting and compelling poem. Well done
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